For the past few weeks, my mind has been spurting weird analogies. I blame it on Lorelei. She’s the one who compared stake outs to blind dates, cities to asylums, and routine to gunpowder. The chapter I’m writing this weekend makes an analogy between balls and merry-go-rounds.
However, what was once exclusively happening in Killing Time OST now infected other areas of my life. Or so was I led to believe when I compared game servicing to selling jeans in a document I wrote at work. And then a game to a highway in a discussion later that day.
So here I am, inviting you to join the madness!
Here is how the drabble challenge works!
- Read the prompt and find your angle.
- Write a drabble (100 words story, give or take five words).
- Post a direct link to your drabble in the comments (or, if you don’t have a blog, just go ahead and post your drabble in the comments).
- In the post on your blog, make sure to link back to this post (new addition to the rules but fairly standard blogger etiquette. 😉 )
Today’s theme is: Analogy! More to the point, I challenge you to find a weird analogy and explore it in a hundred words.
It sounds challenging, I know, but once you get in touch with your inner Forrest Gump, your head will be a box of chocolate. 😉
Analogy
Professor Tam always opened his class with the same lines.
“Classical Magic is like coffee,” he said. All students shot a doubtful glance at the over-sized leak-proof mug on their desk. “In small doses, it empowers you without side-effects. Drink too much, you’re jittery. Include it in your daily routine, you’re addicted and can’t go through a day without some. Brews change but every blend tastes pretty much the same.” The students nodded. “And it’s an acquired taste.”
The class laughed and someone spoke.
“So Wild Magic is like tea?”
Professor Tam smiled, knowing this would be a good year.
February 26th, 2011 at 12:23 pm
made me gigge A X ;o)
February 26th, 2011 at 2:20 pm
Yay!
February 26th, 2011 at 2:02 pm
That was an awesome analogy – how are we supposed to come close?
I won’t, but I like the challenge to make my brain juices flow. I will do my best!
February 26th, 2011 at 2:26 pm
Thank you very much Tara!
This week’s challenge is a bit harder. I had to think about it for some time, testing various analogies until I found one I could run with.
It’s rather fun.
Just pitch two random concepts together and see if you can find links. Repeat until you find something strong enough to be worth a hundred words. 😉
February 26th, 2011 at 2:04 pm
clever and fun! 🙂
February 26th, 2011 at 2:26 pm
Thanks!
February 26th, 2011 at 3:12 pm
here’s mine. enjoy…
http://wp.me/p13Itw-m1
March 6th, 2011 at 2:10 pm
Read, enjoyed, and commented. 😉
February 26th, 2011 at 4:23 pm
Ok. Here you go.
http://taratylertalks.blogspot.com/2011/02/all-grown-up.html
I think I forgot to link back last time, but I did this time. Thanks for the reminder!
March 6th, 2011 at 2:18 pm
The link thing is no biggie; if I wanted it that much, I would have put it in the rules earlier. 😉
I left a comment over at your blog!
February 26th, 2011 at 9:21 pm
Nice one A! I’ll be working on this as I speak XD
February 26th, 2011 at 9:44 pm
http://wp.me/p11PLh-kq It’s up! Surprisingly easy for once.
March 6th, 2011 at 3:08 pm
I’m glad you enjoyed it! I read yours and left a comment.
February 26th, 2011 at 9:44 pm
[…] This is a drabble titled Analogy, which the prompt I took from a fellow blogger named Aheila, from her blog The Writaholic’s Blog. The original post from her is located here. […]
February 26th, 2011 at 10:27 pm
I did like your drabble, enjoyed it! Before I create my drabble here, I can’t resist giving you a new definition, and yes, shame on me!
Analogy – The specialized, medical studies to become a proctologist.
Drabble – Analogy
Dead is like being alone, only without any of the financial commitments. Gary was laying there in his new coffin, trying to make sense of his new condition. He thought, “My, it sure is quiet around here. I think this is just like when I was alive and alone, except now I don’t have to worry about paying my rent.” Gary was disappointed. He thought that the answer to all his pain and loneliness was to end it all. Why not just give up, no one cares. He was sure his sadness would end with his death. But now he realizes he is still alone, still sad, still no one cares, but now there is nothing he can do about it. And since he is dead, he can’t even enjoy the fact that he doesn’t have to pay rent! He realized that he had misunderstood the meaning of J. S. Bach’s, “Come, Sweet Death.” Gary had always thought there was nothing worse than being alone. Not having anyone to share life with, to experience new things together, to laugh and cry together. But in his dispair, he now realized there was one thing worse, death, where you can’t do anything about it. Death is like being alone, except it has no options. End TC Don
March 6th, 2011 at 3:20 pm
The first and last sentences are definitely the strongest. Again, I think this story would have benefited a shorter rewrite. The idea is there; don’t be afraid to cut out unnecessary words so it can shine.
You can do a hundred words long story, I’m sure of it! 😉
February 27th, 2011 at 3:08 am
Really enjoyed your take on this. I liked the way that you took the analogy and held it through the whole Drabble rather than just using it to describe “something”.
D
March 6th, 2011 at 3:21 pm
Thanks! I like analogies to last more than a moment.
February 27th, 2011 at 3:10 am
As usual I tried to go off in a different direction.
Here’s mine…
March 6th, 2011 at 3:24 pm
Great! That’s what makes it fun!
Read and commented!
February 27th, 2011 at 6:05 am
Oooh, you chose a difficult one this week, Aheila! But after giving it a little thought, this is what I came up with:
http://writing-in-the-woods.blogspot.com/2011/02/drabble-day-100-word-story-analogy.html
Thanks for challenging us and making us think!
March 6th, 2011 at 3:30 pm
I can’t always go for the easy theme now, can I? 😉
Read and commented!
February 27th, 2011 at 6:42 am
[…] week’s Drabble Day challenge by Aheila is Analogy. I found this one much harder this week, but after thinking a moment on what my novel is […]
February 27th, 2011 at 7:35 am
I’m not hopeful if it gets read at all after your awesome writing:-) Anyways, here it is:
March 6th, 2011 at 4:43 pm
Don’t sell yourself short! I really liked it!
February 27th, 2011 at 9:13 am
Thanks to you, I get to read and enjoy different styles starting with yours and work on mine.
March 6th, 2011 at 4:44 pm
You’re welcome! I draw the same things from the drabble myself. 😉
February 27th, 2011 at 11:02 am
[…] I’d like to remind people following my blog that today is normally Aheila’s Drabble Day Challenge slot. Her world is Analogy today but – I’m at a bit of a loss at what to write for that (my mind keeps jumping to Euology). I won’t be participating, but there are plenty of others who do so. You can find all of their work here. […]
March 1st, 2011 at 9:46 am
lol…very good….reminds me of elves *grin*
March 6th, 2011 at 4:51 pm
Elves, huh? Intriguing…
March 5th, 2011 at 6:53 pm
Hey A ~~ as a drabble~junkie , there was NO WAY that I was going to skip any prompts . This piece brings me up to date with my drabbles . Hooray !! 🙂
Here’s my link http://writer-in-transit.co.za/drabble-challenge-analogy/
By the way , your drabble was great !! 🙂
March 6th, 2011 at 4:56 pm
I’m the source of an addiction!? Awesome!
Read and commented!