Hello!
Here is this week’s Six Sentence Sunday which, as the name indicates, consists in posting any six sentence of a project on Sunday morning.
I’m sharing an excerpt from a new story with you today. These six sentences are the first ones of Strings of Retaliation, the cyberpunk serialized novel I’m set to start posting here in February. It is the sequel of last year’s project Killing Time OST.
Hope you enjoy it!
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These days, I couldn’t stop pacing back and forth in what used to be our war room. Gabriel had staved off my worry with a never-ending To Do list for most of Lorelei’s absence and I was grateful for it. But the expiration date on her muscles was less than a week away and we still had to hear a peep so no amount of service to my country could keep my mind off the ticking clock.
Would it have killed her to show a sign of life at any point during the past six months?
I sat and tried to busy up my brain with the programming of a particularly complex virus. I didn’t plan to use it – those days were behind me – but it necessitated more concentration than Sudoku.
January 22nd, 2012 at 8:50 am
Great six. Coding a virus because Sudoku was too easy. I love it.
January 22nd, 2012 at 10:48 am
Thanks Wendy! I’m having a lot of fun writing from Vexx’s point of view because of the peculiar way he conveys his genius.
January 22nd, 2012 at 10:56 am
Great tension and frustration in Vexx’s voice. Cool that he codes a virus to pass the time! Really like the title too!
January 22nd, 2012 at 8:17 pm
Thanks Ryan! I wrestled quite a bit with that title. *laughs*
January 22nd, 2012 at 4:20 pm
Interesting-you pack a lot of info into those six lines. I’d like to read more!
January 22nd, 2012 at 8:19 pm
Thanks Karysa! That’s the challenging thing about kicking off a sequel; there’s so much I want/need to say so that newcomers know what’s what!
Next week’s six should be from this WIP too and I should start publishing 2 chapters a week on February 7th.
January 22nd, 2012 at 8:37 pm
Vexx is back! 😀
January 22nd, 2012 at 9:50 pm
And Lorelei. And Gabriel. I’m wondering if Naomi and her fiancé are going to resurface. There are still a few things up in the air about this. *laughs*
January 23rd, 2012 at 9:40 am
YAY! It’s the return of Lorelei and Vexx… Naomi needs an ‘overhaul’ … and the dad… would he make a comeback of sorts? I’m also wondering if we’ll read more of Alice’s “inner city exploits”? What about Lor’s mom? A real enigma… some unfinished business there… 🙂
January 23rd, 2012 at 10:09 am
*laughs* Dad is obviously going to haunt her. And yes, I’m planning to put a bit more of Lorelei’s Alice persona in there. Lor’s mom and “siblings”? That’s the main plot, of course. *writerly grin*
January 23rd, 2012 at 7:09 pm
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