Hello!
Here is this week’s Six Sentence Sunday which, as the name indicates, consists in posting any six sentence of a project on Sunday morning.
This is again, and for the last time, an excerpt from Oil and Boiling Water, which I’m sending to Beta readers this very morning.
Hope you enjoy it!
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Éloi had his back turned to me, facing my brother who instructed him on a few last minute details. I had plenty of time to fully detail him before Guillaume’s expression and Damian’s crooked smile incited him to turn around. Had his lower mandible not been so solidly attached to his skull, he might have lost it. His genuine speechlessness caused blood to rush to my face. I looked down and fluttered my lashes in a very courtesan way.
“There you have it,” Damian laughed, “the true power of Tatiana Seymour.”
January 15th, 2012 at 8:40 am
Very intriguing!
January 15th, 2012 at 8:47 am
Very intriguing indeed. Nice job!
January 15th, 2012 at 10:47 am
I’d like to know more about her power! 🙂
January 15th, 2012 at 11:16 am
Love the mandible line! Tatiana must have been quite jaw-dropping.
January 15th, 2012 at 11:50 am
I like her fierceness! Thinking she’s also got a softer side? 😉 Great characters Aheila and great Six!
January 15th, 2012 at 12:18 pm
Great description of his jaw dropping… this has me intrigued about what she’s doing behind him. Nice 6!