One thing that always surprises me is how a tiny piece of a memory can jump at you and demand to be retold in a completely different story. Take the couch that inspired today’s story for example (and yes, I swear it actually exists exactly as described). I might have sat on it once or twice but mostly, it was this piece of furniture that can only fit amidst the mishmash décor of a students’ café in college. I remember it being in my peripheral vision while I worked out the details of some team assignment or studied for mid-terms.
And it’s now the central piece of a drabble! Who would have thought?
Here is how the drabble challenge works!
- Read the prompt and find your angle.
- Write a drabble (100 words story, give or take five words).
- Post a direct link to your drabble in the comments (or, if you don’t have a blog, just go ahead and post your drabble in the comments).
In honor of that souvenir that suddenly popped in my head, today’s drabble prompt is : Couch!
Here is my story!
Couch
I fired the match and dropped it on the cushions. Of the array of couches that shouldn’t exist, the one in front of me certainly deserved to die smoking. I suspected its designer wasn’t in his right mind; who could think leopard print was suited for furnishing?
I tolerated the student-pay couch long enough. It looked like a porno flick prop and embraced an unreasonable amount of alcohol-induced sex scenes. So really, burning it was a sign of my newfound reason.
Nothing to do with erasing the remnants of my ex…es.
Nope, it’s “grown-up me.”
Then, the fire alarm rang.
December 14th, 2010 at 7:17 am
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December 14th, 2010 at 7:18 am
Hello everybody!
My attempt to redeem myself, 😉
“It looked like a fluffy, breathing couch…”
http://wp.me/pGBcN-69
December 14th, 2010 at 10:19 pm
I hearby redeem you! 😉
December 14th, 2010 at 7:23 am
Hahahahaha!
December 14th, 2010 at 10:17 pm
*does the happy dance*
December 14th, 2010 at 7:53 am
Erm A, i think you should *chuck* the couch now….don’t think it matches the deco anymore…LOL.
December 14th, 2010 at 10:20 pm
Nah! I don’t think so either. 😉
December 14th, 2010 at 7:58 am
Okay, i’m going to have to raise and wav my English (British) flag about for abit. This week i’ll use the U.K version of the word ‘couch’. It’s called…..(drum roll)… a sofa ;o)
December 14th, 2010 at 4:38 pm
Lol we call it a sofa, too. Or maybe that’s just the snooty peeps. 😉
December 14th, 2010 at 6:17 pm
Potato, potahto, Tomato, tomahto. I’ll put my ‘sofa’ up soon…;o)
December 14th, 2010 at 10:20 pm
We use sofa in French as well. *laughs*
December 14th, 2010 at 9:28 am
Hi A – I really love the spin you put on your drabble writing … really unpredictable and charming at the same time 🙂
Here’s my oh-so-predictable take on the couch story :
Perched in the corner of the sitting room , proud and resplendent in all its almost-antiquated glory , the imbuia family couch is the only piece of furniture that will most probably outlive us all .
Old , dependable , tried and tested , this stalwart has endured the glories , triumphs , trials and tribulations of many generations ; and still it soldiers on !
Etched into its wooden frame are the battle scars from being dragged , pushed , pulled and banged . Its upholstery boasts an assortment of stains : ink blotches , alcohol and food stains ; a poignant testament to student living , family gatherings and untold revellery of a bygone era …
December 14th, 2010 at 4:42 pm
Nice! Your description is really elegant.
December 14th, 2010 at 6:49 pm
Thanks R ! 🙂
December 14th, 2010 at 6:20 pm
A lovely drabble Mish! Sounds like a comforting and well loved couch ;o)
December 14th, 2010 at 6:53 pm
Thanks G ! 🙂
December 14th, 2010 at 10:23 pm
Definitely a fine imagery going on. I like all the metaphorical wars that couch has fought. And yet, it’s all about love. 😉
December 14th, 2010 at 10:22 am
Last one I’ll be posting up in a while, not one of my best, but I couldn’t find a decent enough angle for this particular one. I guess the next drabble I’ll be participating in would be next year.
http://noonecanhelpme.wordpress.com/2010/12/14/drabble-day-couch/
December 14th, 2010 at 10:26 pm
That’s right! You did say you were going away for a little while. I hope you have fun and see you next year!
December 14th, 2010 at 10:40 am
My very first drabble. Here goes!
“Why my couch?” I asked when his bloodshot eyes finally focused.
“It smells like home.”
“Are you in trouble?”
“When am I not?” he sighed.
“If I give the couch away would you spontaneously appear where ever it is?”
He smiled that smile. The one that had gotten him past my locks and my better judgment.
“I’m sure you can figure it out.”
I could, but at three in the morning, after being woken by the unmistakable sound of air displacement post teleportation, I was allowed a cranky question or two.
“I’m going back to bed.”
He trailed silently behind.
December 14th, 2010 at 10:29 pm
Hello and welcome to my blog!
I think your drabble is charming. I like the complex relationship it draws between the two characters. Complex yet simple enough to relate to.
Nicely done!
December 14th, 2010 at 3:08 pm
What’s up with you and exes, lol??
Nice drabble!! I never know quite what to expect.
December 14th, 2010 at 10:31 pm
Nothing’s up with my exes. Geez, thanks for the rumors! 😛
December 14th, 2010 at 7:41 pm
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December 14th, 2010 at 7:45 pm
my couch is surfing ;o)
http://wp.me/pTfHl-d0
December 14th, 2010 at 9:46 pm
Read it. Nice one!!
December 14th, 2010 at 10:34 pm
Read and commented. Poor sofa.
December 15th, 2010 at 9:40 am
lol
December 14th, 2010 at 8:57 pm
My drabble’s posted on my blog…
http://eastendjournal.wordpress.com/2010/12/14/drabble-couch/
🙂
December 14th, 2010 at 10:38 pm
Read and commented!
Wow! I didn’t fall behind this week! Yay!
December 15th, 2010 at 12:08 am
You’re remarkable to keep up with everything you’re doing. 🙂
December 15th, 2010 at 6:43 am
That’s very sweet. 😉
December 15th, 2010 at 6:38 pm
Hi Aheila! Okay, you roped me in. 😉
http://notesfromtheunderfoot.wordpress.com/2010/12/15/couch-a-drabble/
I like your drabble! It’s funny how she’s burning it and pretending to convince herself that it’s because of the fabric design, rather than to get rid of the memory of ex..es. 😀 Nice!
December 16th, 2010 at 9:09 am
She’s everything but rational, isn’t she?
I commented on your drabble! Welcome to the fold! 😉
December 17th, 2010 at 7:19 pm
sorry its super super late, but here!
http://jesusloveslynnette.wordpress.com/2010/12/18/couch/
December 21st, 2010 at 7:30 pm
Hi Lynnette!
It’s so nice to read you again. I left you a comment!
May 21st, 2011 at 4:22 am
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