Today, I’m holding a new drabble day but I’m merging it with a very special announcement.
Last Tuesday, I officially became a published author. I had a short short story (barely twelve words over a drabble) published in the “My First Time” anthology. Click on the link and go on the website to learn more about this Kindle and iPad publication (you can also get a free software to read the Kindle version on your PC or Mac). Seriously, look around! You can even access the first (and only) page of my story, called Coffee.
So there you have it, the very first story I was paid for. Awesome, isn’t it? I’m going to have the check framed. I’m not kidding.
What’s the point of this shameless promotion, you ask?
Well, you’ve already had the occasion to read my rejected short story for the publication, A Few More Deaths. Today, I’m offering you my rejected short short. It’s not even a drabble since its 56 words long but hey, it’s my blog. I make the rules!
Speaking of rules, here is how the drabble challenge works!
- Read the prompt and find your angle.
- Write a drabble (100 words story) OR use my drabble as the opening for a longer story (don’t forget to give me credit!)
- Post a direct link to your drabble in the comments (or, if you don’t have a blog, just go ahead and post your drabble in the comments)
Today’s drabble prompt is : Sound!
And here is my rejected, half-drabble. 😉
Knock
The first time I heard someone knock on a door, tears filled my eyes. The sharp and clean noise painted a world without flashing lights in lieu of a doorbell. The doctor walked in but she didn’t need to speak for me to know the operation worked. Forever after this day, knocking was synonymous to bliss.
November 23rd, 2010 at 7:00 am
Hey congrats!
November 23rd, 2010 at 12:12 pm
Thanks!
November 23rd, 2010 at 7:04 am
Woot!!! Congrats on being published! I would frame that cheque too!
And I really like your drabble. Very uplifting 🙂
November 23rd, 2010 at 12:13 pm
Yup. It’s worth way more as a souvenir. 😉
I’m glad you liked the drabble!
November 23rd, 2010 at 7:30 am
Haha I went over and liked your story 😀
Hm… drabble. I wonder what I should write.
On the topic of synesthesia: Sound is like paint. All sound has to its name is the ability to project color and command attention, to me that is. Piano keys sound purple, and violins and string instruments usually sound brown or yellow. Voices, now those are important, I told my friend. I want a partner who has a beautiful voice, clear and crisp. A girl must have a beautiful clear color, while the boy must have a rasp or roughness to it.
Why do I see sound? I have no idea. I just do, and I would never part with it. They are like dance partners.
and if that wasn’t accepted, something more obviously fiction-like:
Klara stood up and faced the wall, her eyes stony as she recalled how she was knocked out by a mere screamer. A screamer, she chided herself for carelessness. How could she have possibly lost to such an inexperienced attack! There was no poise! No grace in it!
Her opponent was escaping, but Klara heard the footsteps guiding her towards her quarry. He would know she was coming for her, but Klara had the advantage- she could boost herself.
Singing a few beats, her body translated the sounds into a reinforcement of her body, allowing her to move much faster without fatigue. Quickly catching up, she started singing more notes, creating them into spears which started leveling themselves at her target Michael.
“You aren’t getting away ever, boyfriend.”
November 23rd, 2010 at 12:17 pm
Thanks!
Both stories are drabbles. It’s not about action as much as it is about self-containment. *laughs*
Do you have synesthesia? A friend of mine has it. I actually wrote a playwright for a contest. It’s called Enlightenment. You can find it in my Other Stories page. 😉
November 23rd, 2010 at 5:50 pm
yeah, I have synesthesia, sound -> color, and smell -> color 😛
I also wrote a small piece for it too, Catching the Harmonics
November 23rd, 2010 at 7:25 pm
Awesome! My friend has letter/number -> color. Some of her letters have a taste too.
November 23rd, 2010 at 7:32 pm
nicee 😀 umm, a very music freak? hahaa. why are piano keys purple! Being a pianist, I say the keys are rainbow coloured! I can make them sound whatever colour I want!
November 24th, 2010 at 7:52 am
Oh my gosh. It. Has. To. Be. Purple.
My mind just won’t wrap around that idea. Sorry 😛
November 24th, 2010 at 12:08 pm
This is exactly the reaction my friend has when she sees colored letters on billboards and such. “A is not yellow! It’s blue! Stop with the stupid yellow A my mind can’t take it!”
November 23rd, 2010 at 10:39 am
Congratulations Aheïla on becoming a published author I’m sure this is just the first of many, many of your words that will ink the pages of many books to come.
November 23rd, 2010 at 12:18 pm
Thanks Andrew! I sure hope you’re right! 😉
November 23rd, 2010 at 6:54 pm
Congrats on being published!!! I understand your well deserved sense of pride which prompts you to frame the check, but if it were me, in my current financial situation, I’d frame a photocopy and cash the check, lol.
November 23rd, 2010 at 7:26 pm
I don’t think you’re THAT short on cash. *laughs*
November 23rd, 2010 at 7:31 pm
congrats on being published!
here’s my Drabble!
http://jesusloveslynnette.wordpress.com/2010/11/24/sound/
November 24th, 2010 at 6:34 am
I’m catching up on all my drabble reading tonight. 😉
November 23rd, 2010 at 10:26 pm
I wrote a drabble for ya. I’ll try to post it tomorrow. My internet’s kinda wiggy today. And I posted one last week for Window – in case you missed it, lol.
November 24th, 2010 at 6:35 am
I didn’t miss it. I just felt the need to take an actual time off this weekend (hence the no blog post on Saturday as well).
November 24th, 2010 at 5:21 am
Cool..right i’ll do one do…ping you when i’m done x
November 24th, 2010 at 6:36 am
Super!
November 24th, 2010 at 10:01 am
Hi A
I’m taking up the challenge you posted last week , which is to try and write complete sentences :
The lone , haunting sound of a flute filled the air , shattering the stark serenity of the twilight hour .
I wondered again , about the source of that heart-wrenching yet nostalgic melody that penetrated the darkness . For three weeks , the wistful sound had become my constant companion , like a faithful ally helping to soothe my fears . I embraced it as one would an old familiar friend .
Seconds , or was it minutes , or an hour maybe , passed .
I waited expectantly , with bated breathe , for the dying strains , which lingered imperceptibly , almost painfully , and then receded into the distant night , becoming fainter and fainter …
November 24th, 2010 at 12:10 pm
I am sooooo glad you decided to face the challenge. And you definitely pulled it off!
Did you know I play flute? *laughs*
November 24th, 2010 at 2:55 pm
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November 24th, 2010 at 2:59 pm
Done..
November 24th, 2010 at 3:00 pm
Doh moment …
http://regypsy.wordpress.com/2010/11/24/drabble-day-sound/
November 24th, 2010 at 9:21 pm
Read and commented!
November 24th, 2010 at 3:25 pm
Here’s the link to my drabble…
http://phildesserre.wordpress.com/2010/11/24/sound-a-drabble/
I really like Mish’s drabble btw. 🙂
November 24th, 2010 at 9:24 pm
Read and commented! 😉
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